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Old 25 Jul 2007, 20:16   #1 (permalink)
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I am Selotu Bargrus. I am a scribe and record keeper of the Blazing Kitsunes chapter of Space Marines, located on Talko Prime. These are the stories recently located of the last tribe-leader of the Tail of Vengeance, 125 years ago, how he fought in this conflict, died, and how the Tail of Vengeance descended into one hundred years of darkness because of his death. He was a good leader. His name, was Grol, he grew up in the village of Noru, a beautiful village located on a tropical island in the middle of the Niri ocean on Talko Prime. He was a good leader then, and is a good leader now. He has a statue and many more records kept in the chapter monestary. Though, allow me to keep this one, of the Golgothan insurgency, up to date.

Prolouge

Grol meditated in his chambers. The walls of the room were made of paper, such as all oriental buildings on the planet of Talko Prime, and the ship was configured to match their needs. They were headed for the Golgothan sector, to retake a relic. It was Grol's duty alone to take it. The relic was known as the holy Kitsune claw, a relic weapon said to be forged and used by the Chapter-founder himself, whoever he may of been, and he had taken out an entire army of Tyranids with him. Grolsat meditating. A door behind him slid open and a second marine, clad in the black and orange armor of the Blazing Kitsunes stepped through.

"We make ready for planetfall, brother-master."

"Excellent, brother Zen." Said Grol, climbing to his feet and flashing his long, white canine teeth. "Are the men in the drop-pod bays?"

"Yes, brother-master."

"Make ready my drop-pod. We shall strike with the lightning power of the Kyubi no Kitsune!

His friend nodded. "For the Kyubi no Kitsune." He said, clasping on the black helmet with the orange crest, turning on his heel, and walking out.

Grol smiled as he walked down the dark halls of the ship, Claw of Talko. It was a Space Marine strike cruiser, able to get straight into the action and deploy its lethal cargo of battle-ready, bloodthirsty Space Marines. He traveled into a large darker room. Torches lit this chamber. He extended both his right and left bare, massive muscular arms and the small cyborg, zombie-like creatures known as servitors crawled from the shadows carrying different pieces of Blazing Kitsune command armor. They helped him into it. When he was clad in the armor, he grabbed his weapons that were passed down to him. The reaper was the name of the axe that the village master before him named the axe, yet he did not know how many generations this weapon had been passed down from. He took it and the holy boltgun, loading it fully. He was escorted by Zen and one other nameless Marine into the main launch bay, which was filled to the brink with steaming drop-pods, ready for their descent, each one filled with dreadnoughts, turrets, and Space Marines. He took an elevator down to his command drop-pod. He climbed into it's cushioned interior, and strapped himself in. The others in the command squad did the same. Then came the battle standard bearer, rushing with the battle standard in the artificial breezes of the ship. Whatever Space Marines were still loading into their assault drop-pods cheered a battle chant to the Immortal undying Emperor. Grol smiled his wicked, long-canined grin. He clasped on his black helmet, the red eyes glowing evilly like a demon's. The interior of the helmet flashed on. It was a screen displaying a target-cross for aiming the boltgun, along with many life-sign readings and many other things. He took deep breath, and spoke into the vox.

"Let us rain unto thy enemy." He whispered into it. "For the Emperor, Talko Prime, and the Kyubi no Kitsune."

The several-hundred drop-pods were blasted down as one, all raining down upon the planet. This was going to be hell upon landfall, and Grol knew it. He screwed his eyes shut, waiting for the thunk of the landfall, and when the ramps open, he would reign the Emperor's fury upon the enemy, and retrieve that relic.

"For the Emperor..." He whispered as the many drop-pods plummeted through the large gouts of anti-air fire from the surface...

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1

The Eldar fired their long-range anti-air drone turrets up into the thick clouds of the skies of Golgotha. The Farseer commander looked at the sky over the Hive City on the horizon. Drop-pods. Monkeigh (Human/Imperial) drop-pods. The machines bled from the heavens, rushing towards the Eldar ground forces in minutes. It would not be long until conflict. The drop-pods eventually smashed into the earth, opening up to release their deadly cargo of genetically engineered warriors.

"Get ready!!" The Farseer yelled out. "They come!"

*****

His eyes finally opened. Grol grabbed his power axe and boltgun, ready for the fight. There was a loud thud as they made contact with the concrete of the planet's surface. The ramps shot open, letting out steam. They were in the center of a park, on a street. He and the command squad jumped out into the thick of battle. Zen was already firing his meltagun at the nearest warrior, making the alien scream, burning to the ground. Two of the tall aliens rushed over towards Grol, but their heads were taken off in mere seconds. The drop site was already the Marine's for the taking! Grol growled, taking down another alien warrior, it's warm blood splashing onto his black power armor. A great shadow loomed over him. He looked up to see a Eldar war walker, rearing it's shuriken catapaults down at him. He ducked out of the way as the sleek guns spat forth their tiny razor-sharp discs of death at him. He thanked the Emperor as a Space Marine Dreadnought, brother Kilo, stomped over, crushing the walker's synthetic leg with his long steel claws, making it fall, he fired his assault cannon down into the cockpit of the war machine, making sure nothing would escape it. Grol gave a nod to his half-dead battle-brother, turning and charging into the fray once more, smashing into a full squad of twelve Eldar Guardians. They all attempted to take him down, yet he was too strong...
*****
Several hours later...
*****

Grol was sitting cross-legged on top of a downed Eldar Gravtank, eating a bowl of ramen. Zen and several other Space Marines of the Tail of Vengeance were sitting in circles around campfires eating the same and sharing jokes and stories. The Space Marine dead were burning on the funeral pyres, though, not much had died here, there were more Eldar dead than Marine. A squadron of thunderhawk gunships and landspeeders flew overhead. The drop-site was indeed theirs. Soon, they would prepare for morning, to hold off another Eldar attack in the morning, and then make their way to the nearest Hive City, of which, in it's deepest darkest areas, they would find their relic. He ripped free the axe stuck in the cockpit of the tank, which had killed the pilot, and made ready for the attack, heading to one of the large command tents on the vicinity. He would eat, prepare, wash up, and ready for attack. He required no sleep thanks to the engineered mind that rested within his superhuman skull.
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2: Cities of death

The tanks and dreadnoughts of the Tail of Vengeance rolled through the great city gates into the Hive. Grol sat inside of the command Land Raider. The massive tank rolled over a pile of debris with the others following. They fell upon an Eldar site. The tanks stopped, letting out the marines, who charged at the enemy. Grol rushed down to the site, roaring a battle cry and blazing with anger. The dreadnoughts and terminators came down, followed by squadrons of Thunderhawks and land speeders.

The site was filled with wraithbone structures, the resource the Eldar use to build their structures, armor and weapons. In the center was a large crystalline object.

Explosions rippled throughout the large plaza. Grol reached the first Eldar Guardian footsoldier, who drew a odd-shaped knife and hit Grol's armor. The alien's skull fell from it's shoulders. Upon examining the corpse, he had slain an enemy female soldier. He looked around. A dreadnought had smashed a grav tank into the cobblestones, a few squads of marines and Eldar guardians were doing battle, and he spotted a sniper up high in a building. He hefted his axe, charging for the nearest wall, throwing the axe over his shoulder, he jumped, grabbing onto the the stone gothic architecture of the building. He began to climb, the servos in his armor noisily grinding. He went up balconies, through corridors, trying to hunt down this sniper. He finally reached him. The sniper looked young. It was male. He had white robes with what looked like a red rising sun on the outer cloak. He lifted the rifle for another shot. The tiny shuriken bit whistled from the barrel of the weapon, flying down through the sky and ripping through the eye-piece of a space marine, whom fell a second later.
Grol grabbed the Eldar by the cloak, and held him up to his face. "Foul xenos scum..." He threw the Eldar ranger's rifle off the side of the building, to the battle raging below. The Eldar watched it fall. "What?" Grol began. "You want your weapon back for a fair fight, correct?" The alien nodded, unable to speak Gothic. Grol smiled, showing his fangs. He put down the giant poweraxe, and still holding the Eldar up by his collar, drew a wakizashi sheathed in his belt. The weapon slit the Eldar's stomach, drawing blood. Then, Grol tossed him down far far below, and watched as he fell until he splattered against the ground, and was crushed beneath a land raider soon after. A missile from a whirlwind accidentally smashed the balcony below hi, and he fell, grasping onto his axe in one hand and his wakazashi in the other. He fell the mile to the ground, landing with a thunderous noise as his large power-armored boots smashed into the cobblestones, shattering them and forming a tiny crater. He smiled. The Eldar were all dead. "Time to move on! Back to your vehicles!"
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Old 01 Aug 2007, 20:22   #2 (permalink)
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Soo... Any feedback so far?? ???
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Intersesting, but i think falling a mile from a building would injure even a spacemarine, but still very good!
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Intersesting, but i think falling a mile from a building would injure even a spacemarine, but still very good!
Nah they can get stepped by a sentinel and still kicked the ass out of that sentinel. That's how unrealistic they are....remins me of those South Indian Action movies. :

But it is good seeing the chapter up and running, Luy. Hope you enjoy them as much as I enjoyed writing some part of them
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Yes yes, thanks for helping make the chapter. On another note, me and a friend have just spent the past few weeks building/painting the chapter master. Coming along nicely...
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its not too bad, not a big fan of naruto so alot of your naming of things doesnt apeal to me. but it sounds ok. 1 thing though

"The drop-site was indeed theirs. Soon, they would prepare for morning, to hold off another Eldar attack in the morning, and then make their way to the nearest Hive City, of which, in it's deepest darkest areas, they would find their relic"

posibly fix it with

The drop-site was indeed theirs. Soon they would prepare themselves for the morning, with plans to make their way to the nearest hive city. Where in the fabeled claw is rumored to be kept"

you could tweak it to fit your style of typing. Just avoid using morning twice and so many commas but thats just me.
otherwise looking good
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its not too bad, not a big fan of naruto so alot of your naming of things doesnt apeal to me. but it sounds ok. 1 thing though

"The drop-site was indeed theirs. Soon, they would prepare for morning, to hold off another Eldar attack in the morning, and then make their way to the nearest Hive City, of which, in it's deepest darkest areas, they would find their relic"

posibly fix it with

The drop-site was indeed theirs. Soon they would prepare themselves for the morning, with plans to make their way to the nearest hive city. Where in the fabeled claw is rumored to be kept"

you could tweak it to fit your style of typing. Just avoid using morning twice and so many commas but thats just me.
otherwise looking good
Naruto? Bah!! lol. I've seen a few episodes but no, not a fan... I just wanted to do a chapter based on the Japanese.
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ah, thats cool. so out of curiosity what does kyubi no kitsune mean?
from memory kyubii is a fox of some sort or a demon fox.....no usually is similar to the and i know kitsune but i cant think of it.
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Kyubi no kitsune means nine-tailed fox.
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