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Old 08 Apr 2008, 07:17   #1 (permalink)
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Default Elf writes music?!?! :O

I wrote this about the girl that's in my heart at the moment. and before I go on lemme tell you how I came up with it. This semester she's been overworked by her teacher's and some of her friends(she feels bad telling them no :P) and usually about once a week things jsut pile up even though she' works harder on her work than I do. and she's still only getting like B's when she should be getting A's. But all the time I tell her she needs a break and every so often she might take me up on a walk or something so I decided to write about it.

Imagine a John Meyher type romantic guitar song because that's what it's intended to be like.

She sits on her laptop
The typing is non-stop
And I think that she might need some time

Her cell phone is ringin
on her chair I'm a leanin
And I think that I might see a sign

(chorus)
Why oh why, wont you take a little time,
let me help you, find some peace of mind

I know you have work,
and your teachers a jerk,
But I just wanna see you smile
)

She won't tell me but I know
there's somewhere she needs to go
A getaway from everything so I

say how about a little break
it's one that you should really take
Away from all the work and the grime

She says projects they won't wait
I gotta have them done by tuesday
She says with a short but sad sigh

(chorus)
Why oh why, wont you take a little time,
and let me help you, find some peace of mind

I know you have work,
and your teachers a jerk,
But I just wanna see you smile
)

I say don't worry about it
just don't throw a big fit
you need this, I'm not gonna lie

She looks out the window
she sighs and says I dunno
I say come on, just give it a try

She torn between work and play
this is just another day
she looks at me with her amber eyes

(chorus)
Why oh why, wont you take a little time,
and let me help you, find some peace of mind

I know you have work,
and your teachers a jerk,
But I just wanna see you smile
)



I smile and hold out my hand
let's go I nicely demand
and then she gives me a smile.....


Well what do you think? All questions and comments/tips are appreciated
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Old 08 Apr 2008, 07:23   #2 (permalink)
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Default Re: Elf writes music?!?! :O

Not bad. Not bad at all ;D

Now just write the music and you'll be set :P
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Old 08 Apr 2008, 07:34   #3 (permalink)
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I can't get it to flow in my head properly. Props for putting pen to paper though.
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