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Old 13 Mar 2008, 15:13   #1 (permalink)
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Default Help with the title of the song I'm writing

Hello!

Just writing a song. It's about when a couple split up and one of them will go out of their way to do things that are purely designed to hurt the other. The lyrical theme is a bit emo, but all my songs are just acoustic guitar and voice - to hear what I sound like go here, although ignore the poor record quality on the first song, it was done in my bedroom a couple of days after a friend killed himself (and is about him), the other was done in a studio with no emotional stress .

Despite having just come out of a breakup, the song's not autobiographical in any way and is actually about a friend of mine (female) whose ex-boyfriend is total scum.

Anyway. The two ideas I have for a title so far are:
The Twist of the Knife
and
I Don't Understand Why So Many Modern Songwriters Give Their Songs Unnecessarily Long Titles

Now the second one will definitely feature on the new album somewhere, but I thought about using it here because it is quite an emo title and my other option is also the first line of the chorus, which might seem a bit cliché. The second line of the chorus is "the turn of the screw" which could be equally suitable.

So, what do you guys think?
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Old 13 Mar 2008, 17:58   #2 (permalink)
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Wow I thought that both of them where great! I if where to even try to help with a song title I would have to agree with your second idea Short and to the point :P
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