|18 Oct 2006, 04:04||#1 (permalink)|
Okay here is my idea, I will write the opening of a story then if you fell like it you can write the next part making this a complety public and unique story.
The Tau commander waited for the launch signal patiently; though his nerves were steady he could feel it in his gut that his guards although they were experienced soldiers were anxious to get to the fight. The air caste pilot chimed in over the radio that the transport was nearing the drop point and that the three battlesuits should make last minute preparations before they were to jump. The commander readied his two guards making sure that they wee prepared to make the jump as they had not made many of the high altitude jumps in their carriers as battlesuit pilots. The transport was finally at its mark and the battlesuits would be diving from their transport right to the heart of the battle hopefully to turn the tide against the persistent imperials who insisted on fighting over a world that the mighty Tau Empire had claimed. The back hatch began to open and the battlesuits started to inch towards the hole there powerful mechanical limbs preparing to jump into the atmosphere and make their decent to the planet surface.
‘Prepare yourselves, and remember on my mark activate thrusters.’
‘Right.’ came the reply from the two battlesuits at the commander’s side.
With that the umbilical cables keeping the suits in place were let loose and the battlesuits were sent to the planet surface. With the world spinning around them the command team had to rely solely on their navigation computers to guide them safely to the ground which was rapidly approaching them at such an alarming rate it would have made a normal man wet himself; within a matter of seconds the tau commander issued his order and the two accompanying suits let loose there thrusters slowing their rapid decent to a crawl with the commander falling in right beside them. Now it was their job to oversee that the prime objective of this war was accomplished.
In the midst of the fierce battle that was raging around her Shas’la Kantou watched in awe as her commander and His team dropped from the upper atmosphere landing sleekly and efficiently just outside the fight. As she fought on in her trial by fire Shas’la Kantou’s fire warrior squad had come under heavy fire from one of the imperial gun emplacements and had become bogged down and were unable to move to their destination, when suddenly an explosion was heard from the building that their enemies gun was stationed, it seemed that the gun had exploded leaving the team to move on to there objective. The team, determined to finish their mission set off towards their goal, but la Kantou could not help but to steal a glance back at where the gun emplacement had been and she noticed something large moving in the rubble; the commander and his team emerged from the flames following her team as they hurried on to their objective, now that the commander was keeping watch over them she knew her mission was one of dire importance.
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