[edraik]

ok i started writing this about yesterday and i think its going pretty well for all the tau words i've been using


As i stood there my hooves firmly in the ground, raising the flag for the Tau'va. The ethereals informed me that the new sept would be named Aun'Yeldi, for the native flora. Fio'O Bork'an B'kak has informed me my new battle suit is an experimental XV-103-2, apperently a merging of stealthsuits and and broadsides it is equipped with a Railgun, A burst cannon of immense size, and a fusion blaster. When we first arrived on this planet the Shas'O told me to get to my stealthsuit and find the enemy headquarters, little did i know that i would soon be taking his position as leader of the cadre. standing at a astonishing 7 ren'oks the Shas'o was much loved by his troops, especially the stealth pilots.
I walked to my comrade Kais (who i trained with at the training dome) I said "Kais I have chosen you to be part of my bodyguard", Kais stared astonished at me after i said this. My leg muscles tensed when i heard someone behind me, i grabbed a rock and spun around ready to attack! It was only master shaper Mont'yr of our kroot troops of our cadre.
I took off my helmet and let the sha'is run through my hair.Just then a shas'vre came up to me and said "sir, we have information on the position of the enemy", i then said "well then please tell me", "It appears that they are backed up in Shas'kDemlock or as they call it, the valley of death", I said "well then said this transmission, convert to the great good now or i shall deliver it from my railgun".
The shas'vre then proceeded to the comm office.
I Was well known for my bad ass additude, my attitude reminded me of a combat simulator the trainers let us play when we werent training, i belive it was called horns or halos or, something of that nature. my new suit looked somewhat like the main characters suit. i slowly ran my fingers on my squads old trinket to me from when i advanced to a shas'vre. it was a hard wired targetting system which has saved my life more than once. I heard something alarming behind me and i grabbed my pulse pistol! i quickly shot at it! I looked down and i found the charred remains of a deadly scorpian. Kais stood in awe at me, Being as tall as a Por'vre that once visited us at the battle dome i guess i was an astonishing site. "whats for dinner?", i asked kais he said "Aun'Yeldi bird soup" yum, my favorite meat food that shas get to injest often. I smelled the wonderful smell of it simmering in the kitchens 20 feet away. Just then a devilfish landed. I recognized it quite well, as my comrades and i have ridden in it many times and occasionaly it has saved our lives. My mate, who was an exceptional fighter, Aun'nan piloted it. oh how many memories i had of that vehicle. we all carved our names into it at one point or another. oh how i longed for those days when we all hadnt even thought about our trial by fire.
Rarely have i had the chance to think so in depth of all that has happend, afer the loss of my D, shovah. We're in the western part of tau space, we have to hunt down renegade O'shovah (no relation to my brother).

what do you think? i know its only a mild start for a noob to writing but i think i did pretty well

edit: there i finished the first chapter.