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29 Jun 2006, 03:27
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Shas'El
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I'm looking for critisism.
I have finished my short story and it is now ready for the public :P
Do not post in that thread, post all comments here. http://fallofmedusa.tauonline.org/index.php?topic=329.0
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29 Jun 2006, 12:07
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Shas'La
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Re: I'm looking for critisism.
You call that short?
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29 Jun 2006, 13:14
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Shas'El
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Re: I'm looking for critisism.
...a wee bit lenghthy, yes? Hm... i'm not sure what to call it actually... 10 chapters is too long to be a short... Hmm...
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