[captain_octavain]

This is eventually going to be one big story so give constructive critisism please ;D

Waring in advance the beginning of the story is always boaring

Main Charactors
Eagal Warriors chapter-master Ajax
Captain Helios of the Eagal Warriors
Captain Arial of the Eagal Warriors
scout master Felix of the Eagal Warriors
Colonel Tyco of aguard regiment
guard sniper Harris
Rok'gor ork war boss

Chapter-master Ajax of the Eagal Warriors starred out of a window on Battle Barge Alexis and saw the dusty looking planet of Mycene, a mountainous forge-world with no major oceans, just many lakes "3 companys of my Eagal Warriors a company of Imperial Fists and two companies of guard were sent here of all places to just to take down an ork MOB!, the d*mn inquisitor lords of Terra said they'd have his chapter ecommunicated if he didn't help out this planet in need" Ajax angrily thought as he turned around to see three figures waiting for orders behind him. " Ahh Brother Captain Taris, Brother Captain Helios and scoutmaster Felix, gather your men togather on the thunderhawks and head down to the planet, i think it's time to get into positions, the orks are only a week away..." Ajax said in sutch a calm tone noone could tell that he was angery
After the three men left Ajax walked over to the ships commander and put his hand on his sholder and said" Take all our ships behind the planets moon to ambush any ork scouting ships.
"Yes my lord" the admril replied.
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Colonel Tyco of the 18th Typhon Dragoons looked up out of his chimera tansport to see dozens of blue-grey and yellow thunderhawk transports acending down from the sky. "The take-all-the-time-in-the-world marines finally decided to show up with only a week left to prepare the planet for WAR!" Tyco yelled out openly as he tapped his hand on the hull of the chimera signalling to the driver to take them to command bunker 32..

thats all I've had time to do today, so how is it so far ???

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Captain Helios tapped his foot impatiently as he waited for the lazy imperial guard colonel "Brother-Captain Lysander shall we start our meeting, that guard fool is takeing forever to get here we must deploy our men !"
"My ears our burnin', soory for the wait, my chimera broke down, and I had to walk".
"Eh... atleast your here".
"Ok lets cut the small talk, how shall we spread our forces throughout the planet"? Tyco questioned.
"Well ...", Chapter-master said as he stepoped out of the shadows f the room", since all the main factories and cities are in the eastern hemisphere iwill deply mine and captain Lysanders forces there and my sout company along the mountain ranges surround the cities".
"Then i'll place half of my regiment along with your scouts and the other half in the cities, and since the commander of the 19th dragoons has already spread out his regiment to the other major cities through out the planet, then i'll order the planetary militia along with them..." Tyco interupted.
"Chapter master Ajax, what shall I do with my company"?
"Brother Captain Helios your company will wait in reserve where you can direct the were they are needed, ok" Ajax replied.
"Yes my lord, but what if one of the forges is taken over by the orks, they will take hundreads of tanks from the imperial armoury."
"If I may interject, I have already taken the liberty of rigging the factories with bombs that will incinerate anything within the factorie, friend or foe"....