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Old 30 Nov 2005, 01:36   #1 (permalink)
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Seasons

Looking into your eyes
So beautifully brown this october
Remember my april that i love you
I told you this in Feburary
The snow falls down creating a crown
On your beautiful brown hair
Like the leaves in autumn
I remember when i first touched you
Hotter then a summer in phoenix
Standing on the edge of this cliff
Staring into the water
The ocean slams against the rock
This summers night
I hold you close
and whisper into your beautiful ear
i love you forever and today


Fall Forever

Walking on the lakeshore with you my best friend
It seems the fog and sky are one for i cant see the lake
If we walked off the docks? Would we fall forever?


Painted a picture of you

I painted a picture of you
Each color showed something..
The darkness all your imperfections
and the light all your perfections...
Where has all the white gone?
You decived me i throw black on this canvas.
Youve ruined everything when we first met it was white
Now that ive painted the canvas
Ive realized how dark it is...
Did all the light paint get lost in the rainbow?
Coming after the rain and leaving only a few hours later..
Much like how i wanted to die.
You came after the rain...
and dissappeared a few hours later...
Your heart is black,
Your face is so white.
Strange how diffrent..
That beauty and looks are..
I have set this canvas on fire,
a master piece no more..
Im coming to your house ive got the gasoline.


The Murderer and Mistress

Tears fall from the angels eyes
What demons have mader her cry?
As the crystal liquid falls
Seeing her like this i only wish to die
Why must my love cry?
I shall try to make this demon die
Bring the sword of despair
For her i truly care
To see her tears i cannot bear
Those glass beads she wears
Before he came we had not a care
Now you came and mest up our heaven
Destroyed our utopia
You came between us now the tears never end
how could you do this
You knew of our feelings
Yet you still came to her and decided
breaking hearts,love and lives was for the best
Your own sick and twisted desires,
For you came and now distrust and jealious rain,
Poor down upon us instead of hope and love,
Wed planned to wed yet you planned to bed
Self justifed whore go offer your sex and fake love to a lonely woman,
For money and profit not actual care,
For she is my heart and youve torn us apart
With your love you grabbed a stake
and drove it through my heart
forget your fake love youve crucified my heart
How does it feel to be the murderer of love?
Taking the knife of lies and stabbing it
Through the pulse of a beating love,
She to be my bride
I to be hers bound by a ring and eternal love
Now its thrown into the lake of despair
I could and touch it
Yet you the loch ness monster
Serpent of the water are making sure i stay away from it,
My treasure at the bottom
So i will take my harpoon and
Throw it for your heart
My aim guided by hatred and hope
If it hits ill drown trying to find our love
For without her im blind and dont understand colors
To open the chest that you locked
I use your heart to open it up and
There are colors love i shall ask her again
and asked to my love again
Theres blood on my hands
Im soaked with water
That lake has soiled my wedding suit
Tainted like you and i
Will we ever be the same?
The lies and poison of this new phoenix
Are flying on a dead straight course for the sun
To burn up we are dead Yet
Still so sick for hes left a mark
Ruined it, we my love are tainted
We need a cure and it doesnt appear to be coming
The Murderer and Mistress
I give you this ring for it shall heal us
I give you my heart for it shall bind us
Together till the end
lets run away and conquer death
The Murderer and Mistress
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Old 30 Nov 2005, 02:34   #2 (permalink)
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*claps*

Wow, that's incredable. You've got yourself some talent going on there. Two questions:
a) When did you write these?
b) Is there MORE?

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Old 30 Nov 2005, 02:37   #3 (permalink)
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I wrote all of those this month and theres lots more.
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Old 30 Nov 2005, 04:14   #4 (permalink)
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Wow mate thats awsome
I wish I could write like you though :-\
My fav was probly the The Murderer and Mistress.
can't wait for more ;D
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Old 30 Nov 2005, 04:27   #5 (permalink)
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thanks Shovah and Mangus i have more some of these are more political they were influenced by punk lyrics.

These are a few months old and the styling is a bit diffrent *if requested i can bring out like some of my first ones which were incredibly emo lol mainly for the interest of reading not actual judging*


Love through the barrell of a gun

I died with the leaves of fall,
Buried by your love,
I sawll your eyes,
You were drop dead gorgeous,
You played me like a deck of cards
Then threw me out cause i was missing an ace
Honey i know im not perfect
but your "lets just be friends"
also means never call me again
Those words killed me
yeah im glad your screaming
looking down the barrel
this is what you get women
im glad your dying
quit crying
you killed my soul
now im killing your body


Underneath

Underneath Your Skin,
Is a Girl Ill Never Know,
Underneath Your Eyes,
Is a Love Waiting To Burn,
Underneath Your Lips,
Is A Girl Cryin For Love,
Underneath Your Clothes,
Is A World I Know Nothing Of,


One Sleeping Pill With a Bullet

Yes i know what my feelings are,
But come back,
come back please? just for tonight...
I cant lay my head down,
I cant close my eyes without you,
I know that out love wasnt official,
but it was there,
Honey i may not love you right now,
But come home come home to me,
Curl up in my bed,
Just let the heat of our bodies drift Us To Sleep,
Baby i know it will take sometime to get over you,
but tonight i'd feel so right if you were myne,
This fire inside my gut isnt of love,
But more of the suicidal kind,
Your memory still haunts me like a ghost,
Why cant i sleep Why Cant I Sleep? tonight


Poison

Submit my life submit my life to you,
Your the only one who helps,
I have more more of you,
It feels so right,
Im gonna see you again tonight,
Cant you see this love is killing me?
Cant you see i hate his guts,
Cant you see leaving me ****ed me,
cant you see cant you see,
Poison poison you've left me,
poison poison i want some more,
poison poison i cant have more,
Poison your killing me,
I cant keep taking you,
Cant you see?
The more of you i get to know
the more i scream,
Poison Your Killing Me


The Front Line

Soldiers dying
Mothers Crying
All we here about is liberating iraq,
Thousands Dying,
Each one a father,Brother or a mother,
how sad would you be if your sister was shot?
dozens by dozens with an american flag hung over them
bang bang your dead,
little boys play soldiers,
how sad it is they pretend to kill eachother,
think of there older brother
most likley praying to surivive,
huddle in the sands of iraq,
how sad it is
Do we ever care?
War will be there,
Every time hundreds to dozens will die,
everytime millions will cry,
everytime billions will pray,
I pray your son wont be on the front line..


Celebrities I

I see the on TV,
All pretty and painted,
Straight out of a fairy tale,
Look at how they make them look,
All over the magazines,
When the take off all their makeup,
Get out behind those lights,
Do they go home and cry,
Do they watch their move alone on the couch,
and ask god why why do they have to lie,
I just wonder,
Are they real?
Behind the masks.
Do they hurt like you or me?
Are they people like the rest of us,
I just wonder,
Are they real?
Behind the masks.
Do they hurt like you or me?
Are they people like the rest of us..
Are they even people...


Celebrities II

Look at them rich and famous,
Stupid and painted,
open your eyes to the truth,
Their Not real,
Its just some coporate deal,
They get painted up,
Turned into sex symbols,
Somewhere some 14 year old is starving herself,
To look like some fake slut whos even more ugly.
Shes half dead anorexit,
All to look look a lie,
Just to be beatiful,
Just to be like something thats not real,
Cant you see these women and men,
Are enslaved in their own lies dertimened to look.
So amazing when really its all special effects,
Hiding every single defect,
Wake up to the lies,
Open Yours eyes,
Its all just a pathtic try,
To poision the youth,
With all these lies,
Their fakes and liars,
All to amaze there buyers,
Its not really its just a hollywood scam,
An MTV sham,
Its sick and twisted,
wrong and deluded,
Look at that 14 year old dying cause she wont eat,
All to be beatiful...

Hey god can you spare a minute?

I see it on TV,
All those people saved,
Lives Turned into a fairy tale,
Look at how they make them look,
All over the magazines,
"Jesus Saves"
"but If God Loves Me"
When the Bible Closes,
Gets put back on the shelf,
Is he still watching over his children?
Are his children perfect?
Do they get everything they want?
Or do cry at night,
Asking why did she leave,
Some times I Lie awake at night,
I stare and wonder,
Is he real?
Behind closed doors i scream,
Is god like me?
Does he hurt like a human being
Is he real?
Can he love and hate like the rest of us...
When london was bombed,
Did god turn his head away,
Or did he watch in dismay,
When we said bye to the Twin towers,
Did he cry with families,
Or celebrate with the killers...
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Old 30 Nov 2005, 15:37   #6 (permalink)
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Holy crackers! Those are really good!
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Old 30 Nov 2005, 23:48   #7 (permalink)
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Heres one i finished like 3 minutes ago.

Silence Is Golden,But darling this bullet is silver

Honey i want you to shutup
Im sick of hearing you utter lies
So heres a goodbye
As you stare into this gun
Remember hun
I'll not forgive you for loving him
and i sure as hell wont let you live
Time for you to sleep forever
Never again to say a word
Silence is golden
But This bullet is silver
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Old 01 Dec 2005, 00:14   #8 (permalink)
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I really like this bit:

Tears fall from the angels eyes
What demons have mader her cry?
As the crystal liquid falls
Seeing her like this i only wish to die
Why must my love cry?
I shall try to make this demon die
Bring the sword of despair
For her i truly care
To see her tears i cannot bear
Those glass beads she wears
Before he came we had not a care
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Old 01 Dec 2005, 00:20   #9 (permalink)
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Thank yee.
I think i already told you i wrote that whole poem of that one on the back of the bible during a church ceremoney thinger.
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Wow man! You're like super-human-writer-guy!
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