View Single Post
Old 20 Dec 2006, 12:12   #4 (permalink)
ToastMaster
Shas'El
 
Join Date: Nov 2005
Posts: 3,794
Default Re: The Real Warhammer 40,000!

I realize you're just doing a trial issue, but you need to work on the Marine's proportions. His right arm looks like and Eldar's when he's saying he's out of ammo, which isn't right... as Marines are like twice as thick as Eldar. Also, to help make the comic's point less confusing, you may want to tell what the Marine is shooting at in the first panel. If you said he was shooting at the same vehicle as he was with the Lasgun the Flashlight>Bolter joke would run more smoothly.

You're definitely off to a good start, though.
__________________
Quote:
Originally Posted by Falstead
Falstead: I don't think you can ever justify a T5 goat in a regular 40k game
Lord_Veqq has joined TauOnline.
Guest6363: SEMENATION COMPLETE
Lord_Veqq has left TauOnline.
ToastMaster is offline   Reply With Quote
 

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91